The script asked for Jaune to be stalked but those panels became very VERY crowded with that bearded guy or the van passing them again and again but i couldn t bring it over my heart to delete the dialogue as well.
I put in that black panel right before the upload and I enjoy how easy and quick it was to draw this digitally. These kinds of outlines with (1 level better than this page shows) grey areas - maybe just one layer of stark black area... could make this process much quicker. But there are things that are so much easier to ink digitally. Despite that I always end up correcting some bleed or misstep digitally again. Maybe my eyes get more manic about this, maybe i really don t improve at inking...
I recently listened to an art tutorial basically saying: one spends 40 percent of time to improve an artwork the last 2,3percent. That s too much. One should do that in my eye when it really counts, but for this comic a quicker upload schedule would be more important than those last 2, 3percent. Whenever I look at a page though that has an uncorrected mistake, i cant see nothing but that.