Razor s Edge 2 / ( 9 )
This page was just too much. The Barbera-Water Panel was supposed to be animated. As well as some experimentation with music/disco lights in the first chapter - just highlights bouncing off the characters. Also Yasmine s Hair was colored in her bright pink, but it just looked too jolly and got too colorful.
The Ladys scarf will be addressed on the next page and actually has story relevance.
All in all there are two chapter I was really concerned with when writing them. Well, I have issues with some other chapters, but these two are the ones I am scared to not make interesting visually. This is one of them. Also... I do have a character sheet on yasmine, but i caaaaant draw her yet. Totally did absolutely not copy paste her head from the character sheet and slightly altered it....