Havoc 13 / ( 27 )
This whole scene is a nightmare in character placement, horizont-lines and camera angle. In parts its a bit too boring, but in parts that is wanted, because a lot of stuff is going on. I did not come up with a good solution to G hitting a dummy on the previous page, B tearing the gun out of Gs hand and switching to an actual human - i envisioned this much funnier. Also I had Gabriel on some kind of Tank thing (sort of the thing from the last page) and simply getting in the Way of Barberas line of fire with me constantly changing the dialogue from B being amused by Gabriel walking in front of her gun to being annoyed that she should MOVE HER STRIPED ASS. But its a bit more logical to have Yasmine step in. Pretty sure the recoil would harm Yasmine and Barbera, but hey, logic.