I think the transition would have been better to show a larger view of Barbera, Yasmine and the others entering the hole instead of cutting right to when they re already in.
And i just realized for the first time why i have such a hard time drawing headshapes in twisted... from certain angles. the thin necks are a stylistic choice, but... the ears somewhat sit at their traditional position in relation to eyebrows and eyes. but with that thin neck the ears don t line up with the neck anymore. the more i think about it the less i can draw this. but then again.. if i look at some older drawings, i wonder how i could ever think that they were ok. so i actually could not draw it back then either, but i did not notice how off it was.