I was drafting the next page and it really dawned on my: I can do better than what I had sketched. Which was all of this text within one single speech bubble. Then i seperated the speechbubbles in two and inverted the panel - to have mukoshi talk black on white and white on black... but no. It doesnt reflect the sheer chaos that his space was invaded with. I am really happy I did. While this page is not a pure rendition of awesomeness... it is much more dynamic and fits the mood and my artistic drive more than the previous lame decision. aaand it threw me back in the time table. again. worth it.
