In the Pines 10 / ( 17 )
In an earlier draft, Jaune was greeted by the butler and starts to swamp him with adoration until he cant take it anymore and hits her. she gets up again, haha - your fist slipped - and continues. then he hits her over the head with a metal tray and shes out and he drags her to... well, you see on the next page. But at a later point i decided to cut all unnecessary characters from this chapter as it got complicated and long. so the butler had to go. there was also a long scene showing, how loyal the butler is so to make it realistic that hes in on jeys perversions. but hes not. there is no butler this evening. the family is out. jaune, too, for the time being.