Jaune 3 / ( 9 )
Uff, a text-heavy page. Much text is not rare in comics, but together with a very detailed style, i wonder if I could have handled this information better. In the old version, the whole page went like this:
Jaune: They re all insane!
Lady: If you get to know each other, all the little misunderstandings will vanish.
Barbera: There is no way I tell Plush Girl anything about my life.
Lady: I have Arguments that will convince you. Get Gabriel from the cellar and join my in the drawing room.
(in the drawing room): Your D-Ward-Files.
All of them screaming.
So, yes, that was easier. But it also took out some personality, while using the text for telling things that could be drawn or are not important. Also, there is a larger picture to consider. At this point in the old comic i did not really know, what the Lady s plan was and how it started. She is not just playing a game anymore.