As you might guess, this page is the second half of 2 pages before. I planned to show Gabriel s and Barbera s entrance either right after the exposition page of Henry and his guys walking through the office (which would be too early) or after this page (which would interrupt Schroedingers train of thought and feel too rushed in term of what B and G experience of the whole ambush. I mulled this over for days again and again and only found the way to cut this page in half acceptable. Its always a show of bad writing, if you can shove around some scenes. Not happy about that.
