I am pretty happy to have gone through with this chapter. As probably mentioned before, I had this chapter marked for deletion. The other chapters all have some details that are connected to the main storyline. But The Red does as well: It was pretty hard to figure out otherwise, why Jaune would stay with the others. I had the Lady and Jaune talk about it, which would just be 2, 3 panels in another story. The golden Show not Tell rule does much more to the production time of a comic than to the script. So I used the chapter to experiment with some techniques that I am using for work projects and other stuff as well now. I always have the urge to justify to myself spending time on twisted...
