Old Friends - 5 / ( 8 )

Commentary My kid is sick and i totally forgot that today is upload day... not the first time, but this night it really bites me and i have no time to add a commentary.

Just in short - well, i hope Schrödinger comes across as no bullshit, direct, focussed lady, not as an asshole. Since the dialogue is very cut down, this might come a bit sudden... maybe, its really hard for me to tell - that Schrödinger is tired of not given direct answers or anything of substance. There was more cat and mouse in the previous drafts, as mentioned before - but that made only sense for people who already know way more of the story and for those who didnt, it added yet another layer of ??? that i felt was not too important. there is enough mystery about Ls past already. Mukoshis main concern is his stopped time and distrust, not really the person L. Yet.