Razor s Edge 5 / ( 14 )

Commentary That crowd scene looked way better in my head - ah, i fix this in post - nope, no i wont. had so much trouble with other parts of the page - especially the translation this time - i couldnt spend any time on this and my eyes are just watering. put on nice make up today... still clinging to my most expensive kajal, that probably is way past its prime, maybe that explains something... or i just got generally more sensitive.
Where was I. yes. that page.
Sorry, dear audience, barbera is your stand in here - the reciever of another bad guy monologue plan explainer.
There are so many cracks in Ls facade here - she is doing EXACTLY what B saw through. Shes selling the others out. Yes. She will later in this chapter have a discussion with gabriel, how good it would be to ARM these MONSTERS. good luck with that. Also - asking Barbera if she can imagine something better than some lame dismembering... this was a gateway into a barbera monologue of gruesomeness.

I had the plan to have Barbera kreep closer to the lady over this page. from them being apart in opinion to being on the same page... side of the sofa and Barbera getting invasive again. The pacing of the dialogue didnt make for a good transition and B stays on her sofa way too long, because they re on different pages.
I also doubt that they could talk this openly when it was established, that Yasmine has eyes and guns on them. This venue is probably bugged or at least monitored. Couldnt just put them in yet another of the - in this comic - abundant viewing rooms!