Prey 5 / ( 13 )
Oh no. I sooo struggled with that 9th panel and its still off. I think it comes from trying to show two things at once. and a healthy dose of wonky anatomy. I want Jaune to be deadpan here. She had it by now. almost. for really realzies now. and at the same time its pretty damn whoa, that she stops a face stomping with one hand. the impact is completely lacking. usually i try to show a movement with the whole body, if i can manage it. i am really annoyed at that panel. uuusually i would go to another artist, but til last minute i thought i could solve it on my own and now its too late.
And ha, in the first panel of that row - jey san throwing jaune down, i just FORGOT about the background. Just drew int he lines and then wanted to finish it. I considered adding a red area in teh shape of the movement, but red is usually reserved for the most angry, aggressive and menacing panels in a chapter. and we re not there yet... I left it, because jaunes reversal is more important. The I GET IT.