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Commentary hokay, so, basically we ve got China, France, India, Israel, Pakistan, Russia, the UK and US... every time when I draw a map of my characters and where they are at a given moment in a story, I get this glorious quote in my head.
So. Bascially. We have Schroedinger connecting the dots, which is so much not to the liking of the Lady. Dangerous territory...
And i think, I fell for an old trope: squatting a bug and having the spy s ear drums blow out. After drafting this chapter I rewatched the Fifth Element. It also had this Element with a cockroach and a shoe. Not sure, if my subconsciousness got the idea from there. I always hate when this happens. Even worse, when you have a totally original idea and then see something that already has this idea following through. and worse: does that better than you ever could. raarrgh.