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Commentary L had an even longer wall of text in the third panel. But it did not feel right and did not look good and what she says is not epic enough to warrant a larger panel. She also said, that her way to relax is actual, undisturbed sleep and that she s in dire need of it now. This might be trivial but I don t feel entirely good about cutting this. The info that L is hard at work during the whole day is planted again and again - like when she entered a few pages back, carrying a tool box and workers jacket + hat but also fancy secretary clothing. COSTUMES get it... Well. Its ok - it stil is a lot to read and shifts around. laying blame, ordering, setting up new rules.

I just realize, that the wording is slightly ambiguous... L mentioning the body disposal and her next sentence is suggesting to take gabriel. No word of going out and finding a victim... ehm. Not sure, i have read the script too many times. In my head its obvious that theyre about to go out to find somebody now...