New Friends 01 / ( 4 )

Commentary Short and stakkatto for flu reasons.
I really really should have finished this page when i scanned it and not tonight with fever and brain mush. There was SO MUCH MISSING on this page. The backgrounds for the first two panels (copy pasted them in from the last chapter)... until i remembered... that this was all part of a typography plan. The Title should have been part of the character layout and i have no clue why i didn t ink that. Usually I remember this stuff... not today.
No character Sheets for the gang people, which lead to hilarious deviations in each panel. Changed that by now but the characters here looked nothing like the final design...
The script at one point had barbera urging Gabriel to attack, because they re surrounded by monsters. The Lady holds Gabriel in check with the simple question if Gabriel forgot to count. Disrupted the exchange and i threw it out.
Oh yeah, one logical mistake but it feels to convoluted to change that: That label was written by gabriel, who delivered ... erk cough... whose frieeends delivered those. It SHOULD said Predator or Triebor on the label, not Exhibitionist. I realized that but then again: the label has no accent. a Saner version of her wrote that. How she knew in advance? The same way her tapes get recorded...
Maybe it should say MEET US on it though. mh.