In The Pines 11 / ( 17 )
In the very first draft of this chapter it started with Don (the boss of the Syndicate) walked with Jey through the gangs vault, that is situated in this villa. They keep talking about how distrusting Don is about them digital stuffs and he wants everything physical. Money, Investments... Jey tries to persuade him to change to a digital payrol, but Don doesnt want to hear about it. Everything looks as if it was designed by apple. The whole vault and its very OCD. Honestly - it would not have been fun for me to draw that. It was also to dudes talking about gang infrastructure... while it is good info to know and it does play a role, it is not INTERESTING to the core story.
I have a line down for the cellar jaune is at. Also designed by apple. its supposed to be this really clean, organized, disturbing cellar. I am not sure, if i really go with it, since there are two chapters happening in there. But the room will have sort of a progression - so it might be nice to start out all clean and shiny. Also to have a contrast to Gabriels bunkers and Barberas cellar adventures